Talk:OCs in need of critique and help!/@comment-44191369-20200319211931

Not a dragon, but he is a dragon rider. His name is Sunn Golding. He has amber eyes and black hair.

Personality

-Ambitious

- Hot headed

-Unpredictable

-Sarcastic

-Stubborn

Backstory: Sunn lived most of his life behind his brother's shadow, and because of this, it's why he's so hungry for attention. And I guess feeling non existent all the time has made him feel a little angsty, so he's unprediactable and hot headed. He has a pretty bad temper despite having sticks for arms and legs. A few years later, his brother started a dragon rider gang, basically a small group of friends who go out to have adventures and stuff. (occasionally getting into fights, because there are other rival gangs.) Sunn is considered the runt of the squad, he is thought of as stupid, useless, weak, and can't do anything of use. While his brother is getting showered with compliments, he's just sitting around in a corner, I guess. His own dragon doesn't even belong to him in the first place. It was actually one of his brother's dragons that he replaced with a cooler one. So now, Sunn, is obviously tired of all this crap. Fun facts:

-He likes to eat chocolate, chocolate makes him happy

-His best friend is Devoni, another member of the gang

-He loathes his brother

-He is an Aries

Here is a drawing of him. Hopefully I can develop even more info about him soon.

So what do any of you think? (If there is anyone here)